新东方考研英语作文模板
小作文书信整体结构：
一、称呼
常见称呼：a.写给个人：(不知道姓名)Dear Sir, Dear Madam,Dear Sir or Madam
(知道姓名)男性比较简单，就一个 Dear Mr Smith,女性分情况 Dear Miss Brown, Dear
Mrs Brown, Dear Ms Brown
b.写给单位、组织DearSirorMadam,ToWhomItMayConcern,DearMr.
President, Dear Mr. Wang
二、正文
三、结束语：公务信函、私人信函通用的Yourssincerely,最简单的私人信件：Yours，
由于结束语只是形式而已，大家只要写对了就可以，不必非要写多难的单词，而要求稳。
四、签名：考研中不可以写自己的真实姓名，写作要求中会给出名字供大家使用，一般英语
一是Li Ming,英语二是 Zhang Wei。
建议信（Letter of suggestion）
模版一：(提出多条建议)
Dear ___________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to
make some constructive suggestions here.
In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions.(建
议的内容)First of all, I highly recommend that句子 . Secondly, 名词性成
分 will also contribute to the solution of the matter concerned. Finally, I would
like to mention 名词性成分 .
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss
this matter with you to further details.
Good Luck with your_______
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
模板二：（只提一条建议）
Dear ___________,
Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning .Inthefirstplace,I
wouldliketosaythankyouforthehelpandeverythingelseyouhavebeen
offeringtous.Meanwhile,Ialsowanttomakesomeadvicetobetterthe
situation(用在你已经接受过对方服务，现在要提建议的时候).
As a 身份（consumer/frequent visiter of your restaurant/experienced user
of your product/a student of English majors） , 建议内容（arranging for
more parking places/renewing the menu/simplifying your design for the elder）
ispreferred.Ontheonehand, 理由一.Ontheotherhand, 理由二.
Besides, it is unnecessary for you to 没有必要做的事情.
I hope that my opinions are able to innovate some effective ways to better
your service , and please feel free to contact me for more discussion.
求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,
Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertised
in_______(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间)./Ilearnedfrom (报
纸名称)thatthereisavacancyfor ,apositionwhichIammuch
concerned.
Being a student majoring in English (亮明身份、专业). Not only do I have
thequalificationsforthisjob,butIalsohavetherightpersonalityfora
__________(工作名称，和 thisjob同指).Intheonehand,thecoursesofmy
major have already armed me with professional knowledge in the field and my
internship enabled me _to attain the necessary skills (第一个原因).（用 1 句话简
述相关的具体实习）On the other hand, my enthusiasm to explore deeper in this
field leads me to do every bit of the work with responsibility as well as interests
(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you
need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me.
Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIamlookingforwardto
meeting you.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
申请信
模板一（求学，类似求职）
Dear_______,
I am writing you this letter to apply for a scholarship in your university（申
请项目）in order that I would pursue my graduate study for the Master's Degree
inyouruniversity. （简述目的） Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould takea
consideration of my application .（表示感谢）
I am confident that I am qualified to apply for your university. （总体） First
of all, I have passed CET6 and kept on learning English all these years. So I do
not think I will have many problems in language while studying abroad. (理由
一)Inaddition,mysoundknowledgeandskillsinmymajorpermitandwill
facilitate my further studies（理由二）
I would be appreciated if you could help me make clear the following things.
First, (问题一)。Second, (问题二)。At last, (问题三)。
I would appreciate your consideration of my application .Should you have
any question ,please feel free to contact me .Look forward to your reply .（再次
表示感谢，并盼回复）
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
模板二（申请成为某个项目的参与者）
（2006 年）You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a
child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them
to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help
and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Moved by the noble cause of Project Hope and encouraged by what has been
achievedsofar,Iwouldliketocontributemybittotheprojectbyoffering
financial aid to a child in a remote area of your province.
Iwouldbemuchgratefulifyoucouldhelpmeseekoutagirlwhohasjust
started schooling but whose family cannot afford her education. My plan is to
pay for her tuition on an annual basis till she finishes her secondary education.
Iwouldliketoremitmydonationdirectlytoabankaccountopenedbyher
family in her local area.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
邀请信
模版一（正式）
Dear________,
On behalf of， I would like to invite you to visit/attendour university / our
university's50anniversary （ 访 问 单 位 / 出 席 活 动 ） .Therewillbean
________openingceremony________( 内容 )at/in________________( 地点 )
on_____年月日______(时间). We would be honored/glad to have you there with
us.
The occasion will start at ____钟点_______(具体时间). It would give us great
pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the ceremony/meeting.
This will be followed by a __lunch_____(进一步的安排). At around___钟点___(时
间)，____________________________(另一个安排)
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期
限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
模板二（非正式）：
Dear ，
I will be holding/throwing aparty/ball/dinner atmy house （地点） onApril 8
th
(日
期) in order tocelebrate my mother's birthday/my parents' golden wedding (缘
由). Asyou are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would be glad if you
could join us and share our joy.
Theoccasionwillstartat8：00p.m.（时间）,andactivitiesinclude .In
addition, there will be new friends to be introduced to you. I am sureyou will
enjoy a good time.
Myfamilywouldfeelhonoredbyyourpresenceandwearewaitingforyour
reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
辞职信
（2005）Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs &
Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide
toquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,
stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Dear ,
I am writing to inform you about the decision to resign from my current
position. After two months of work,（时间段）I find it is inappropriate for me to
take the position as a/an (职位)
There are a fewfactors involved.First and foremost, （理由一） .
Secondly, （理由二） . Last but not last, （理由三） .
I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the rewarding
experience that I have enjoyed during my employment.
I sincerely wish you could approve of my resignation, and I apologize in
advance for any inconvenience thus caused. I promise that I will stay through
the next month to help you find a replacement for my position.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
道歉信
模板 1：过去没有完成的事情
Dear ，
I am writing this letter to apologize/to make an apology to you for my failing
to attend your wedding/help you with your paper translation （没能完成的事情） .
The reason is thatI had to work extra hours/to prepare for the next day's
exam (原因). My company has recently undertook an important order from a
foreign company.It happened to be a conference on yourwedding day at which
I did the translating work for my boss. Because of its emergency, I was not able
to find someone instead.（交代具体事情）I am sorry thatI cannot celebrate your
important day/translate all your paper in time,(再次表示道歉) but is it possible
that I make up the loss by finishing it on a two day delay? (补救)
I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板 2：将来不能做的事情
Dear ，
Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to attend your
wedding/helpyouwithyourpapertranslation. （不能做的事情）Itismainly
because at that time I will be fully occupied by work/examination which is quite
out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your wedding/ your due time.(原
因)Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence
on your wedding/help you with your paper. I sincerely hope that you willenjoy
a good time/find someone else to replace me. By the way, can we have dinner
together some time next week? I hope to see you soon.
I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
感谢信
模板 1（私人）：
Dear ，
I should like this message to be taken as an expression of heartfelt gratitude
to you and 其他人/事物 . If it had not been for your assistance inhelping
me with my English(帮助的内容) , I fear that I would not be able to do so well in
my exam.（如果未受到帮助的结果).
During my preparation for the final exam, you generously sacrificed your
time to explain the knowledge points where I didn't master well（第一点帮助）
and alsorecommended several all-rounded reference books for me to facilitate
myreview（第二点帮助）. Without all these, Iwouldn't have made suchabig
progress.（总体说明帮助的重要性）
Thus, I really appreciate your kind help, and I hope that I may repay your
kindness by (回报帮助). Finally, I feel most obliged to thank you once
more.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板 2(正式)：
Dear ，
On behalf of , I would like to extend our most sincere gratitude for
your contribution to our project （帮助内容）.
We appreciate greatly your aid in not onlyspending plenty of time doing
dedicated researches , (第一点帮助)but also your selfless share of the studying
results and other valuable data which is of great significance to our project.（第
二点帮助）. Without your cooperation, such a splendid achievement would not be
possible.
We will never forget your painstaking labor and full cooperation.With this
letterwewouldalsoliketoformallyinviteyouto .Wearelooking
forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
投诉信
OnyourwayfromBeijingtoParis,youlostyouluggagecarriedbythe
airline. Write a complaint letter to the service center of the Airline. In your letter,
you should tell them
1) what happened to your luggage,
2) what your luggage is like,
3) what compensation you expect.
Dear_______,
I am . (自我介绍) I am writing you this letter to draw your attention to
the most undesirable attitude and manner of a particular member of your staff
/quality of the product/the lost of my luggage.
经历描述型
On Friday, June 2, 2006, I traveled on your airlines from Beijing to Paris.
When I went to pick up my luggage in Paris, I was informed that it was missing.
条理论述型
Thereasonsformydissatisfactionis___asfollows/notbeyond
acceptance/picky(总体介绍). In the firstplace,___after we ordered the meal, we
couldn't manage to find a waiter or waitress to serve tea. They only appeared
when served us food.(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, __we waited a long time
for our dishes served. They were all cold when they finally reachedour table.(抱
怨 的 第 二 个 方 面 ).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit
_hard/difficult/unmanageable__( 感觉)to__enjoyourdinner/haveahappy
family reunion_(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
I appreciate it very much if you could_give us a better explanation of it (提
出建议和请求),preferably__refundourmeal________(进一步的要求),andI
would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
大作文
整体布局
五、引言
第一句：总体描写图画
第二句+第三句：细致描写图画
第四句：说明文字内容
六、主体
第一句：主题句，图画深层含义
第二句~第四句：1）不利于社会的现象：分析现象产生的 2-3 个原因（分析角度：社会、历
史、政治、个人）、分析该现象造成的不良影响（分析角度：社会、个人）
2）有利于社会：分析该现象的好处（分析角度：对社会、集体、个人）、举例论证（举出
2-3 个由此良好社会现象或者政策引发的好的结果 e.g.限塑令）
3）有利有弊：先分析好的方面，采用 2）的方法。+过渡句+再分析不好的，采用方法 1）
4）人生哲理类：一定要说明抽象的道理适用于我们的生活学习工作，具有普遍性。道理论
证（2-3 个论点，每个论点带有简短阐述）。道理论证+举例论证（每个分论点后都举一个例
子）
5）第五句：小结
6）三、总结
7）第一句：总起句，表明现在要发表建议
8）第二~第三、四句：阐明 2-3 点建议
9）第五句：总结全文（展望未来）
第一句：总体描写图画(定语从句、同位语从句)
As is vividly/symbolically depicted in the picture/cartoon,we can notice that____
Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact that
As is vividly revealed in the cartoon,
The drawing vividly illustrates that
This set of drawings vividly reflects the fact that
：细致描写图画只有一个主人公的时候，抓住中心人物展开描写。如果是几幅图对比，要
把不同点写出来。
（2003 年）The above two pictures have shaped contrast to each other. As is shownin the first
drawing, the flower is placed in a cozy green house which shelters it from the severe wind and
storm. With proper temperature and other good conditions, the flower is growing in full bloom. In
contrast,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothewindandstorm,theflower
immediately fades and withers, with most of its petals cast about on the ground. The two pictures
show us that the flower growing in the green house can not withstand the ordeal （严峻的考验） of
the wind and storm.
如果两幅图不构成对比，直接说 inthefirstdrawing···intheseconddrawing/intheother
drawing
第四句：说明文字内容
The caption reads(显示)," love is like a lamp which is brighter in darker places."
Thecaption on the right/left to the picture tells us that love is like a lamp which is brighter in
darker places.
We are informed that love is like a lamp which is brighter in darker places.
二、主体
第一句：主题句，图画深层含义
中性语句： As is symbolically revealed in the drawing/set of drawings, the fact that(同位语从句重
复上面的图画信息)profoundlyindicatesthat 主题词 ismomentous( 重要的)and
fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
Through the thought-provoking illustration, the drawer aims to point out that attention has to be
paid to _主题__.
Undoubtedly,throughthethought-provokingillustration,thedraweraimsatremindingusthe
significance of _主题__.
Through the incentive illustration, the drawer aims to point out the advantages and disadvantages
of __主题_.
危害社会的现象：The recent a few years has witnessed a phenomenon of主题which seems to
be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity.
This phenomenon of主题should be condemned severely or made illegal.
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward.
背景：一般基础的学生：withglobalization,idolworshipisextremelypopularamongthe
adolescents.
With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, young people in expanding numbers
adore superstars.
基础较好的学生：Theexpansionofculturalglobalizationhasseenthepopularizationofidol
worship among adolescents.
原因： thanks to mutual understanding and cross-national friendship, it is possible for us to enjoy a
harmonious world..形式主语
Due to the opening-up policy, mutual understanding and cross-national friendship will paly a more
significant role in building a harmonious world.非人称主语
Having joint into the irresistible trend of globalization, mutual understanding and cross-national
friendship are the prerequisite for us to construct a harmonious and peaceful world.现在分词完
成式表原因
Sinceglobalizationhasbecomeanirresistibletrend,weneedmutualunderstandingand
cross-national friendship in harmonious international communication.状语从句表原因
Globalization being an irresistible trend, harmonious internationalcommunication requires more
mutual understanding and cross-national friendship in.独立主格表原因
驳论法
The real meaning of love is quite beyond the attraction to a person of the opposite sex. It lies in
our contribution to the society.
Atfirstthought,peoplemayconsiderlovetobetheaffectionbetweenmanandwoman.But
deeper thinking leads us to its core meaning of unselfish contribution to the society.
Somemayconsiderlovetobetheaffectionbetweenmanandwoman,butactuallyinbroader
sense, it contains one's contribution to the society.
结果假设法
Ifthespiritofteamworkiswellbuiltinthegroup,morecooperationwillfacilitatethe
accomplishment of every task they undertake.
The spirit of teamwork being built, every task the group undertake will be facilitated by effective
cooperation.
It is definitely true that good spirit of teamwork will aid the accomplishment of every task they
undertake.
第五句：小结
Generally speaking/ Briefly speaking/ On the whole/ It is natural to get the idea that
第二段大框架：
主题句。For one thing, 。For another, 。小结
主题句 。 Firstofall, .Inaddition,/what's
more/Furthermore . 小结
主题句。On the one hand, . On the other hand, . 小结
主题句。First, . Second, . Third/At last/Eventually/Last but not
the least, 小结
好坏分论：
主题句。The Internet benefits us in a lot of ways. One of the most obvious one is that Internet has
now become one of the best forms of media, with its swiftness and interactivity. Furthermore,
with the assistance of Internet, people can now have easy and quick access to each other. However,
just like a coin has two sides, the Internet is a two-edged weapon./ Meanwhile, the negative
effect of Internet should also be paid enough attention/ The duality of the Internet also needs
equal attention./However, the other blade of this sword has also under heated discussion./
Nevertheless, Internet has also shown its disastrous effects when being used
inappropriately./Nevertheless, its disadvantages are also raiding our daily life, which
requires our alertness. On the one hand, a great many people admit that they are too much
addicted to the Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. One the other hand, its
ability to distribute information and connect people around the world is often abused by some
people.小结。
三、总结
第一句：总起句，表明现在要发表建议
So to sum up, it is imperative for us to envisage realities and take effective measures before the
situation turns from bad to worse.
When all factors are considered, we may safely come to the conclusion that ___ really count in
this competitive society. It deserves more attention and praising from the public.
So to sum up, it is obligatory for usto take effective measures aimingatthe disadvantages(that)
___ brings to us.
Considering the social reality, it is high time for us to work out effective measures to prevent its
negative influences.
第二~第三、四句：阐明 2-3 点建议
从政府角度(立法和监督作用)：Weshouldappealtoauthoritiestolayasidesufficientfundto
develop plans.
We should appeal to our government to make severe laws/policy to control this situation.
Our authorities should exercise strict control over ___.Person who attempt to destroy the normal
order of ___ should be punished seriously, thus to establish a healthy ___ culture.
从社会角度（道德呼吁）： We ought to progress the sustainable social and economic development
which is the key factor in dealing with _______.
We are obliged to enhance people’s awareness that ____is vital for us.
We are to shoulder the responsibility of working together to counter this threat to our life.
从自身角度（提高自身修养）：We should be brave in the face of difficulty.
We should encounter the difficulty with the confidence to overcome it.
Withstrongbeliefindeterminationandself-discipline,the istobeovercamesooneror
later.
We should cultivate ourselves the capability of distinguishing right from wrong and utilize ___
moderately.
第五句：总结全文
倒装句：Only with mutual understanding and national friendship can we enjoy a peaceful world.
虚拟语气：Without mutual understanding and national friendship, a peaceful world would not be
possible in our real life.
比喻句：Mutual understanding is the key access to a peaceful world and national friendship is the
bridge to connect you and me. Therefore, let's together hold the key to cross the bridge and step on
the way to each other's heart.
大作文千外别背新东方模板全国都在背 判卷老师都看烦了 xywhere 发表于 2013-12-26 13:07
大作文千外别背新东方模板全国都在背 判卷老师都看烦了
这个分析的确很对啊！！！！
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