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一、小作文：（一）小作文五大范文之一：邀请信
Directions:
In order to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Day in September, your class is going
to hold a celebration in the evening of that day. Supposing you are the monitor of the
class, write a letter about 100 words to the foreign students in your university to
1）invite them to attend the celebration,
2）explain to them the meaning and custom of the Mid-Autumn Day, and
3）tell them some details of the arrangement.
经典范文：
Dear Friends,
On behalf of Class 3, I warmly welcome you to attend theMid-Autumn
festival celebration.
The Mid-Autumn Day, falling on the 15
th
of August in the Chinese lunar
calendar, is a traditional Chinese holiday for family members and loved ones to gather
together. Aside from enjoying the glorious full moon, Chinese people will also eat the
traditional food of festival—moon cake. Considering thatsome studentscannothave
thisyearlyreunionwiththeirfamilies,ourclassdecidestoholdthiscelebrationto
make everyone feel the love and friendship on this special day.
Ifyouareinterestedinparticipatinginthiscelebration,pleasefillyour
personalinformationonourschoolwebsitewww.bfsu.edu.cn.Theactivitywillbe
held on the playground from 6:30 p.m. to 10:30 p.m. on Sept. 30
th
. (130 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
亲爱的朋友们：
我代表 3 班热烈欢迎你们参加中秋节的庆祝活动。
农历八月十五的中秋节是一个传统的中国节日，家人和相爱的人会
在那一天相聚。除了欣赏美丽的圆月， 中国人也会吃一种传统的节日礼物——月
饼。考虑到一些学生今年无法和家人团聚，我们班决定举行此次庆祝活动使每位
同学都在这个特别的日子里感受到爱和友情。
如果你对这个活动感兴趣，请登录学校的网站 www.bfsu.edu.cn，并
填写个人信息。活动将在 9 月 30 日晚上 6:30 至 10:30 在学校的操场上举行。
你真诚的，
李明
（二）小作文五大范文之二：建议信
Directions:
You have received a letter from Marilyn. She expressed her admiration
for micro-blogging and wondered whether it can replace books as the main learning
resources.
Write a reply letter to explain your opinions.
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Dear Marilyn,
Having known that you are trapped in the puzzle about learning resources,I
am really concerned.
Youarerightthatmicro-bloggingconveysin-timeand,forthemostpart,
insightful messages.However, before you mainly rely on it to pursueyour study,you
shouldalsoconsideritsotherside.Micro-bloggingisfragmented,inconsistentand
unsubstantial,whichmakesitdifficultfortheuserstosystematicallyand
comprehensively grasp knowledge. In this case, studying mainly from micro-blogging
willpreventyoufromestablishingsolidknowledgesystemsor,inotherwords,
achieving the ultimate goal of learners.
By contrast, books, although comparatively lagging in imparting information, are
currentlybestforprovidingsystematicallyarrangedknowledge.Therefore,youare
advertised to considerbooksas themainlearning resources and visit micro-blogging
merely for complementary, up-dating information. (129 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
亲爱的玛丽莲：
得知你陷入从何处学习的困惑，我真的很担心。
微博传播的信息及时，并且大部分极富洞察力，这一点你是对的。但在
你主要依赖它学习前，应该同样考虑下它的另一面。微博是碎片化的，信息不连
贯也不充分，这使微博用户很难系统地、全面地获取知识。鉴于此，主要从微博
学习会阻碍你建立牢固的知识体系，或者换句话说阻碍你实现学习者的终极目标。
相反，书本虽然在传播信息方面相对滞后，但在提供系统知识方面目前
做得最好。因此，建议你将书本视为主要的学习资源，访问微博仅仅为了获取补
充性的、更新的知识。
李明
（三）小作文五大范文之三：投诉信
Directions:
Write to the head of a train, and complain about its bad services.
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a regular passenger of your train, I am completely disappointed to find that
the service you provide is far from satisfactory. Therefore, I am writing this letter to
draw your attention to the matter in the hope that the present situation will be much
improved.
As we all know,punctualityis essential to therailwayservice. However,the
train is delayed from time to time,which brings me much trouble and inconvenience.
Worstofallisthebadmannersofyourstewardsandstewardesses.Fromtheir
services, we cannot understand the saying: “The customers are the god.”
Ibelieveyouwilltakethismatterintoseriousconsiderationandgivea
satisfactory reply as soon as possible. At the same time, I sincerely hope that you will
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reviewyourmanagementsystem.Iwouldbegladtoseeimprovementsinyour
railway service.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的先生或女士：
作为贵列车的一位常客，我完全失望地发现您提供的服务远远不能令人
满意。因此，我写这封信希望引起您对这一问题的关注，期待您能极大改进现状。
众所周知，准时对于铁路服务非常重要。然而，这趟列车经常晚点，给
我带来很大的麻烦和不便。最难以忍受的是贵列车男女乘务员糟糕的态度。从他
们的服务中，我们很难体会到：“顾客就是上帝”。
我相信您会认真考虑这个问题，并尽快给出满意的答复。同时，我真诚
地希望您能改善管理系统。我很高兴看到您列车服务的改进。
李明
（四）小作文五大范文之四：备忘录/报告：
Directions:
Theenvironmentalprotectionclubisgoingtoorganizesomeactivities
with the theme of “Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus”. As
the club leader, you will write a memo to the members to explain the importance and
arrangements of those activities.
Do not sign your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.
To: All club members
From: Li Ming
Date: January 5, 2013
Subject: Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus
We are going to launch a series of activities to promotelow-carbon lifestyle,
or more specifically to advocateenergy efficiency, waste minimization and recycling.
Thisgreenlifestyleisapotentialrecipeforahealthierandmorehabitable
environment and highly recommendable to every person.
To attract more schoolmates toaccept this low-carbon lifestyle,we will hold
lecturestointroducethenewlifeconcept,makebroadcastprogramstorecord
low-carbonexperiencearoundusandhostanexhibitionoffruitsofrecyclingto
encouragestudentstomakethebestuseofold stuff.Inaddition,wewillhandout
leafletstoeverydormitory,recommendingstudentstoswitchoffunusedlightsand
other electrical equipments, recycle paper, batteries and plastic bottles, and travel by
bicycle, bus or subway.
All members are required to take part in those above activities. Other creative
thoughts and brilliant ideas about activity plan will be encouraged. (148 words)
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致：全体成员
自：李明
日期：2013 年 1 月 5 日
主题：创建绿色文化，建设低碳校园
我们将举办一系列推广低碳生活的活动，更准确的说，就是推广有效利
用能源，减少浪费和回收利用。绿色生活是实现更健康更宜居环境的诀窍，应该
推荐给每个人。
为了吸引更多的校友接受低碳生活，我们将举办讲座介绍新的生活理念，
制作广播节目记录我们身边的低碳经历并且举办回收成果展览以鼓励学生利用
旧东西。另外，我们将向各寝室发放传单，以建议同学关掉不用的电灯、电器；
回收纸、电池和塑料瓶；乘自行车、公交、地铁出行。
所有成员要求参加上述活动。大家可以提出其他关于活动计划的创意和
好点子。
（五）小作文五大范文之五：告示
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanannouncementto
welcome students to join to a club. You should write at least 120 words following the
outline given below:
1）本社团的主要活动内容
2）参加本社团的好处
3）如何加入本社团
Welcome to English Club
January 5, 2013
WelcometoEnglishClub!Itcouldserveasaplatformtoshowyour
outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.
You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas,
holdinggroupdiscussions,watchingOscar-winningmovies,andsoon.These
after-classactivitiescouldofferyouampleopportunities.First,youractive
participationishelpfultostrengtheningthesenseofresponsibilityandmanaging
interpersonalrelations.Second,variousactivitiesorganizedbyuscouldraiseyour
level of proficiency in English. A good command of English empowers you to enjoy
decided competitive edge over your peers.
Youcanfileawrittenapplicationtoourstaffofficeoremailusvia
englishclub@163.com. The deadline for entries is January 31. Come on, join us now!
(127 words)
English Club
欢迎加入英语俱乐部
2013 年 1 月 5 日
欢迎加入英语俱乐部！它能成为一个平台，展示你卓越的才能，并帮助
你开发众多技能。
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你可以参加各种各样的活动，包括表演音乐剧、进行小组讨论，观看奥
斯卡获奖影片等等。这些课外活动能为你提供丰富的机会。首先，你的积极参与
有助于培养责任感与开发人际关系。其次，我们组织的种类繁多的活动能提高你
的英语熟练程度。良好的英语水平使你比其他人享有明显的竞争优势。
你可以向我们的行政办公室提交书面申请或通过englishclub@163.com
发送电子邮件。报名截止日期是 1 月 31 日。快来加入我们吧！
英语俱乐部
二、大作文：（一）大作文五大范文之一：教育文化
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,
you should
1）describe the drawing briefly,
2）explain its intended meaning, and then
3）give your comments.
被葬送的传统文化
经典范文：
As is shown in the drawing, an aged man is burying a huge thread-bound Chinese
bookentitledTraditionalCulturewhichhasauniquenationalstyle.Hunchinghis
backandraisinghishands,theweakoldmanishammeringacrossontothehuge
book. The caption indicates: “ The buried traditional culture”.
ThetraditionalChinesecultureisnotonlycertaintosurvive,but,infact,is
destinedtothriveandprosper.Tobeginwith,onefactorthathasalreadybegunto
contribute to the preservation ofChina’s traditional cultureisits commercialization.
Since China’s opening-up to the outside world, China’s acrobatic and Beijing Opera
troupes as well as other branches of theChinese traditional culture have emerged as
burgeoningtouristindustries.Inaddition,anotherreasonthatthefutureofChina’s
ancient culture can be considered “safe” is the active efforts to protect it on the part of
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the Chinese government.Traditional arts, such as calligraphy, dance and music,are
often taught as a mandatory element of young children’s education, ensuring that they
grow up with an awareness of their cultural roots.
In my opinion,traditional cultureshould be encouraged and maintained. For one
thing,thisisveryimportantindevelopingasenseoflocalidentityandcivic
continuity,and in maintaining thecommunity spirit.For another, the economy may
rise and fall, but a strong feeling ofbeing partof a distinct cultureis timeless, and
vitaltoovercomingcollectivedifficultiesandimprovinglifeforeverybody.(247
words)
如图所示，一位老年人正在埋葬一本巨大的具有独特中国特色的名为《传统
文化》的线装书。这位虚弱的老者弯腰驼背，举起双手，正在将一个十字架钉在
书上。文字说明显示：“被葬送的传统文化”。
中国传统文化不仅肯定会存活，事实上，它必将繁荣兴盛。首先，传统文化
自身的商业化已经开始对其得以保存做出了贡献。自从中国对外开放以来，中国
的杂技团、京剧团以及中国传统文化的其他分支已经开始迅速发展为旅游业。其
次，中国政府做出的保护文化的积极努力是中国古老文化可被视为“安全”的另一
个原因。传统的艺术，比如书法、舞蹈和音乐，经常作为儿童教育的必修课在学
校教授，保证他们成长过程中能意识到文化根源。
我认为传统文化应该被鼓励和保持。一方面，传统文化的保持不仅对于培养
地方认同感和城市延续性的意识，也对维系社会精神至关重要。另一方面，一
个国家的经济可以时起时落，但是这种强烈的维护特有文化的情感却不受时间限
制。它对于克服一切困难、提高人们生活水平而言关系重大。
（二）大作文五大范文之二：人生哲理
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your
essay, you should
1）describe the drawing briefly,
2）explain its intended meaning, and then
3）give your comments.
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Itisillustratedinthepicturethattwomenbehavetotallydifferentlywhen
encountering with difficulties and adversities. Disappointed and dismayed in front of
the huge Chinese character “difficulty”, an idle man is just sitting still, doing nothing
butmoaningallday,whiletheothertryandexerthisstrengthtoclimboverthe
seemingly insurmountable mountain.And below the portrayal, there is a topic which
says: “in the face of difficulties”.
The purpose of the cartoon is to tell us thatadversityis a means of strengthening
the mind and soul. For one thing, sustaining hardship can lead one to a new direction
inlifeorevenahighercalling.Todemonstrate,in1993,J.K.Rowlingwas
unemployed, suffering from clinical depression, and had contemplated suicide. It was
in this state of despair that she conceived the first rudiments of what later became the
best-sellingHarryPotterseries.Foranother,sufferingchallengescanalsoteach
people to be happier and to live life to the fullest. Survivors of deadly natural disasters,
for instance, will be thankful to have escaped with their lives.
Accordingly,undergoingadversitiesencouragespeopletolearnwisdom,
humanity, and self-reliance, and is a vital and unavoidable aspect of any individual’s
developmentofcharacterandcompetence.JustastheworldfamousGerman
philosopherFriedrichNietzschewroteinhisTwilightoftheIdols,“Whatdoesnot
destroy me, makes me stronger”. (234 words)
如图所示，两个人遭遇困难和逆境时，行为截然相反。一个懒惰的人在巨大
汉字“难”面前灰心沮丧，静静地坐着，无所事事只是抱怨；而另一个人则竭尽
全力翻越了这座似乎难以逾越的大山。在漫画下方，有一个小标题写着：“困难
面前”。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在逆境中生存是一种是头脑和灵魂更加坚韧的
手段。首先，身处逆境能够唤起人们对新的人生方向或更高使命感的追求。例如，
1993 年 J.K.罗琳失业了，她因此患上了抑郁症，并企图自杀。正是在这种绝望
的状态里，她构思的第一个雏形成为后来最畅销的《哈利·波特》系列。此外，
挑战也可以教会人们更加快乐和充实的生活。例如，从致命的自然灾害中得以逃
生的幸存者，会懂得感恩。
因此，经历逆境可以鼓励人们去学会获得智慧、博爱和自力更生，因此是个
人性格和能力培养过程中不可缺少的重要组成部分。正如德国著名哲学家弗雷德
里克·尼采曾在他的名著《偶像的黄昏》中写道：“凡是不能毁灭我的，都会使
我更坚强”。
（三）大作文五大必背范文之三：人生哲理
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your
essay, you should
1）describe the drawing briefly,
2）explain its intended meaning, and then
3）give your comments.
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风险与机遇并存
Asisdepictedinthecartoon,acertainenterpriseisfishingsuccessfullyinthe
oceanoffinancialtsunami.Inthefaceofhugewaves,thepersoninchargeofthe
enterprise seems to be extremely enjoying fishing in such a horrible circumstances.
We are informed that “Opportunity and risk coexist”.
What account for the opportunitiesthat each of us has in our lives? This question
is likely to elicit avariety of responses. To begin with, in addition tothe element of
chance,alargepartofopportunitystemsfromindividualattitudesandmindsets.
Opportunitiesoften exist allaround us, waiting for those with the courage and enterprise to
seize them. What is more, many of our opportunities are the result of hard work and perseverance.
AperfectexampleisOlympicathletes.ManyOlympiansarebornwithsuperiorphysiques.
Without years of rigorous training, however, none of them would have realized theirpotential or
have had the opportunity to participate in the Olympic Games.
To sum up, it is my view that the number of opportunitieseach of us has depends
onacombinationoffactors,includingrandomchance,individualmindset,andthe
degreeofone’sperseverance.Onlypeoplewhoarewell-preparedandconsciousof
seizingopportunitiescanmakefulluseofopportunitiesandachievesuccess.(216
words)
如图所示，某个企业正在金融海啸的汪洋大海中成功地垂钓。在惊涛骇浪面
前，企业负责人似乎极为享受在如此的环境中钓鱼。我们得知：“风险与机遇并
存”。
什么因素决定了我们每个人的机遇？这个问题也许有各种不同的答案。首先，
除了偶然因素，机遇有很大一部分来源于个人的态度和心态。机遇往往就在我们
周围，等待那些有着勇气和事业心的人抓住他们。其次，我们的许多机会源自勤
奋和坚持不懈。典型的例子就是奥运健儿。许多运动员具有良好的先天条件。但
如果没有经过多年的严格训练，他们无人会意识到自己的潜力，也就不会有机会
参加奥运会。
总之，我认为，我们每个人具有多少机会取决于多种因素，包括偶然巧合、
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个人心态以及一定程度的个人努力。只有那些经过良好准备并且有意识抓住机会
的人才能充分利用机遇并获得成功。
（四）五大范文之四：经济管理
Directions:
In this section, you are asked to write an essay of 160-200 words based
on the following chart, in which you should
1）describe the chart briefly, and
2）give your comments.
全球电子商务成交额统计
As can be seen from the above bar chart, money value of annual global electronic
commercetransactionsisincreasinggraduallyduringthe15years.In1997,itis
almost2 billion dollars,while the number reached90 billionin2005.By2011,the
number jumped dramatically to 300 billion dollars, 150 times than that of 1997.
Whyiselectroniccommerceboomingnowadays?Severalcausescontributeto
this phenomenon. Above all, the availability ofcomputer is the foremost cause and
the rapid development of information technologyenables everybody to have access to
computerandInternet. Nowadays,Internetisnolongerastrangertocommon
people.Whatismore,theInternettechnologyisbecomingincreasinglymature.
PeoplewhoatfirstdonottrustbusinesstransactionsonInternetnowbecome
convinced thatdoing business on web is extremely convenient and effective. Last but
not least, electronic commerce is the fastest way so far to make transactions across far
distance.Itmakesitpossibletodobusinessathomeanditsavestimeand
unnecessary formalities as well. That is why it is preferable to traditional commerce.
The boomingelectroniccommerceundoubtedlycontributes to the prosperity of
world economy and it also gives birth toSOHO, a special group of people working at
home. The trend towards a promising e-commerce is inevitable. Accordingly, let’s get
prepared to embrace this irretrievable tendency.
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由上图可见，在过去十五年中，全球电子商务成交额正快速稳步增长。1997
年，全球电子商务成交额约为 20 亿元，而 2005 年数据增长到 900 亿美元。 2011
年数据迅猛增长到 3000 亿美元，是 1997 年的 150 倍。
为什么当今的电子商务发展如此之快呢？这一现象产生的原因有几个方面。
首先，电脑的普及是最主要的原因。电脑技术的快速发展使每个人都能接触到电
脑和互联网。现在，互联网对普通人来说已不再陌生了。其次，互联网技术正日
趋成熟，起初不相信网上商业交易的人们，现在已开始相信网上做生意既方便又
有效。最后，电子商务是目前远距离交易最快的方法，是它使在家做生意成为可
能，还节省了时间和不必要的手续。这就是为什么电子商务比非电子商务更受青
睐的原因。
快速发展的电子商务无疑为世界经济繁荣做出了贡献，由此也产生了 SOHO
这种在家工作的特殊人群。电子商务的大有可为之势不可避免。因此，让我们准
备好迎接这一不可逆转的趋势吧。
（五）大作文五大范文之五：社会热点
Directions:
Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteanessaybasedonthefollowing
chart, in which you should
1)describe the chart briefly, and
2)give your comments.
中国某城市住房拥有权的变化
0%
20%
40%
60%
80%
100%
199020002010
State-owned
private
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第一段：Since1990,Chinahaswitnessedagreatchangeintheownershipof
houses.As the chart shows, the percentage ofstate-owned houses in a certain city in
China decreased considerably, dropping from75% in1990 to20% in2010, while the
corresponding figures forprivate housesincreased dramatically, rising from25%to
80% over the same period.
第二段：The rise and fall can be accounted for by a couple of factors. For one
thing, the boom of the urban economy has resulted in the increase of family income
and the improvement of family economic conditions has led to the changes of people’
sminds.Nowadays,hirepurchaseorinstallmentplanhasfounditsgrowing
popularity and acceptance. These have promoted the purchase ofprivate houses.For
another,thegovernmenthasputinforceaseriesofnewpolicieswhichprovide
residentswith subsidies and loans toencourage their real estate investment. These policies
make it easier for an individual to buy his or her own house.
第三段：In my opinion, owning a house is also an excellent investment for an
individual.Withthepopulationrisingasquicklyasitis,itisaverygoodideato
becomeapropertyowner.Intheforthcomingyears,landwillbeincreasingly
expensive, and thereforeless attainable. Furthermore, if one buys a house, it is likely
that he will be able to sell it at a reasonableprofit in the future. Accordingly, the increase in
house ownership is acceptable for both the authority and individuals, which should be encouraged.
参考译文：
自 1990 年以来，中国的住房拥有权发生了巨大的变化。图表显示，某城市
国有住房的比例大幅度减少，从 1990 年的 75%下降到 2010 年的 20%，而同一
时期私有住房的比例急剧增长，从 25%增加到 80%。
这种起落是由多个因素造成的。一方面，城市经济的快速发展使居民家庭收
入不断增加，家庭经济条件逐渐改善导致人们思想观念的转变。如今，分期付款
的购房方式越来越受到人们的欢迎和接受。这些都促使个人购房比率快速上升。
另一方面，政府实施了一系列新政策给居民提供购房补贴和贷款来鼓励人们投资
不动产项目。这些政策使得个人购房变得更加容易。
我认为，对个人来说，拥有自己的房子也是极好的投资。随着世界人口的快
速增长，拥有财产是明智的选择。将来土地会越来越贵，因此也越来越难得到。
另外，如果消费者买了房子，他以后可以将房子卖了赚一大笔钱。因此越来越多
的人买房子对政府和个人都是好事，应该鼓励。
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